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  • The Only Time He Listened

    The Only Time He Listened

    “I’d follow you anywhere,” said the dog, who wanted to feel loved. “I’d probably lose you,” said the man, who spoke truth. “Down the road, you will need each other,” said the hawk, with a long view. “I believe you,” said the man, the only time he listened.

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  • A Loud Banging Drum

    A Loud Banging Drum

    She heard a loud drum beating a muffled beat above her head and she felt the mallet strike the soft spot on the crown. She tried to reach it, but the drum seemed so far away. Then she awoke. A water drop splashed a puddle over her eyes. She tried to wipe away the water but her hands were stuck below her.

    She panicked and kicked her legs. They failed to touch bottom and she realized she was dangling in a hole with her arms below her wedged into the rock. She was helpless and alone in the dark. Her helmet was behind her head. She must have fallen somehow. The moment she didn’t remember.

    She screamed for help. Her voice echoed against the walls of her prison until it faded. No light reached her. The lantern on her helmet started to flicker and went out. She now hung in the dark, the water dripping in a slow rhythm. She closed her eyes. The loud banging drum returned.

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  • Plan for World Domination

    Plan for World Domination

    A Conversation

    “That’s interesting.”

    “What is?”

    “This video on stem cells.”

    “How so?”

    “It says we can convert fat cells into stem cells and rebuild our bodies.”

    “Figures.”

    “You sound like you already knew this.”

    “No. But it all makes sense now.”

    [bctt tweet=”The plan for world domination. It all started in the 50s with Americans eating too much.”]

    “How so?”

    “The plan for world domination. It all started in the 50s with Americans eating too much.”

    “Okay. I still don’t follow.”

    “Fatten up the populace until they can’t walk and then rebuild them into lean fighting machines.”

    “I hardly think Uncle Rick will be turned into a fighting machine.”

    “Just look at him. Paunchy, big ol belly. He’s perfect for fat cell conversion.”

    “Yeah, but still. He lacks motivation.”

    “That’s the genius behind this plan. They can suck out Uncle Rick’s fat cells when he’s sleeping and when he wakes up he’ll be a marine!”

    “World domination huh?”

    “Yep. Just another reason for the world to hate us.”

     

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  • Feeding Your Muse with Music

    Feeding Your Muse with Music

    Sometimes the best way to fill a blank page is to feed your muse with some writing music. While I would love to have a writing table overlooking the ocean near the cliffs of Big Sur, I can still get there with some music to remind me of the atmosphere and the setting. Of course, writing music also helps me get into a new scene or chapter.

    Now, this isn’t a treatise on what type of music to listen to. I get inspiration from country, rock, pop, or classical styles. However, it is a reminder that music is a powerful way to get you into a particular place or character’s mind. Is it any wonder music soundtracks often hang with us longer than the film? That is because music feeds our inner muse and makes the story stronger.

    Merle Haggard’s Seashores of Old Mexico serves as inspiration for my work in progress, Fish Tacos. The song tells a story of a fugitive on the run who discovers love in Mexico and a reason to stay on the run.

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    In fact, story songs are often the best for prompting a new story. What happened to the protagonist? As a writer, we can tell their next story. So, dig out those old vinyl records or that lost playlist and listen. You might find a story hidden in the feeling you get from the music. Even our muse needs writing music from time-to-time to keep us writing.

     

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  • The Face Behind the Frame

    The Face Behind the Frame

    In the periphery, he saw children wearing uniforms crowded around an adult giving them instructions for the day. He neglected to smooth his tunic. No need. It never changed. He clinched his knee keeping his slender fingers straight. The letter balanced on the edge of the table. One errant breeze and it would fall. He hoped it didn’t land out of the frame. He stared into the exhibit hall waiting for the children. One curiously looked up. He realized she had missed him to examine a pastoral scene over his head. He glared more intently to catch her eye.

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  • Author Reading: Poetry

    Author Reading: Poetry

    I started writing poetry as a cheat of sorts; I could write a compact story very quickly. My sister Debbie is the poet in the family. I do my best. She writes beautiful, heartfelt prose that makes you think. She was the one that explained Robert Frost’s “Two Roads” poem to me so that I understood it was about his decision not to go to war. I thought it had to do with walking in the forest.

    Anyway, in this Author Reading, I recite some of my favorites poems and explain why I wrote them.

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  • Book Review – The Ultimate Hero’s Journey: 195 Essential Plot Stages Found in the Best Novels & Movies

    Book Review – The Ultimate Hero’s Journey: 195 Essential Plot Stages Found in the Best Novels & Movies

    Well, that’s a mouthful and they had to use an ampersand to make it all fit. However, Neal Soloponte provides 195 plot stages to consider in shaping a novel so the title needs some heft. The Ultimate Hero’s Journey: 195 Essential Plot Stages Found in the Best Novels & Movies delivers so many plot stages that I fell into the rabbit hole Soloponte took in writing this book.

    Like my favorite, Structuring Your Novel: Essential Keys for Writing an Outstanding Story, by K.M. Weiland, this book provides an outline of what must go into a novel to make the reader want to finish the story. Except this is a scientific look at the process. Soloponte takes Joseph Campbell’s Hero’s Journey canon (I recommend The Power of Myth) and breaks it down further into what needs to happen as the hero journeys from the reactive (ordinary world) to proactive (adventure world) stages of the novel.

    Soloponte says that a good novel contains 3 phases:

    1. Something happens
    2. Someone does something about it
    3. Either things change for the good or bad

    He then goes on the show the 195 things that have to take place in each of these phases to grab the audience and hold them until the end.

    At this point, it gets rather complicated because you can’t see where all of these stages have to land, other than a rough idea of the progression of the plot. So, you have to keep going back and finding out where you’ve been and what you’re missing. I suggest an overlay of the plot stages over Weiland’s model just to keep track of it all (I may work on something to be downloaded later from my Writing Tools page).

    Overall, the book is great and revealing as to what goes into a story with many fine examples examined and torn apart by Soloponte. The author says at least 80 percent of the plot stages he has identified will be found in a great novel. Of course, the creative mind may alter the placement of the plot stages, but Soloponte says the plot stags can be found in the most successful novels.

    I recommend this book as an excellent resource into what science finds makes a great story. Of course, we are writers and creative license is something we will always take with us.

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  • Author Reading : May 16, 2018 – A Moment of Pure Truth

    Author Reading : May 16, 2018 – A Moment of Pure Truth

    I wrote this story after reading about a rare albino redwood on California’s coast north of San Francisco. I saw it as magical and spiritual. If I had my druthers, I’d live in Sonoma County or near Santa Rosa and make my way to the coast as often as I could to see the redwoods, ferns, and rough coast of the Pacific.

    This is a short story about a group of people at a settlement conference: a sort of preliminary attempt to close out a lawsuit before a trial. Most of the settlement’s are managed by previous judges, so they know what will fly in front of a jury, and what won’t fly.

    I tend to gravitate towards out of body experiences, paranormal, and strange phenomena. I suppose it is part of my belief we all are part of a collective experience and we certainly don’t have an answer for all of the mysteries of the world. I also think our imaginations fuel our passions and experience. So, in this story, I have no problem with a guy believing his daydream is reality.

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    Original Story: A Moment of Pure Truth

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  • Cindy's Sin - A Las Vegas Story: Cindy’s Sin – Chapter 8

    Cindy’s Sin – A Las Vegas Story: Cindy’s Sin – Chapter 8

    Cranberry Juice

    The emergency room at the county hospital seemed too busy for a Tuesday morning. Tucked in every corner sat screaming babies with frantic mothers, homeless suffering from the heat, foreigners nursing hangovers, and Cindy with a gunshot in her arm.

    She sat in the middle of a bed pushed into the hallway with her legs dangling over the edge. A gauze pad with a red circle of blood covered her arm. This part of the adventure she could have done without.
    “All I found was cranberry juice,” Wallace said. He snuck up on Cindy as if she might hit him.

    “Thanks.” Cindy refused to look at him. She put the bottle on her head and let the cold penetrate her headache. Wallace placed a towel on her neck.

    Wallace felt sick. The shootout left a man dead, a hurt friend, and most of all, the end of a good place to stop for breakfast. This girl almost died. So close to the age of his youngest daughter. What a mess.

    “This will be just a moment more,” a nurse said. “Can I get you anything?”

    Cindy opened the bottle and took a sip. “Just let me go.”
    “In due time, dear,” said the nurse.

    “I just don’t understand how you could do hand the book over like that,” Cindy said. The nurse spun to answer and Wallace waved her on. “You just put the book in his hand.” Wallace nodded. He had handed over the book to Loudin’s bodyguard. After everything, the decision seemed prudent.

    “You live through enough of these shootouts and you learn to live another day,” Wallace said. The answer sounded stupid and Cindy did not like it. The stranger probably would have killed her. Then again, he might have walked away. Either way, the whole mess stunk. “It’s just,” Cindy tailed off.

    Her true nature showed through the facade of a strong girl. Deep down she feared the future. Her aunt in Salt Lake was all she had left. Her father shot dead. Her mother dead of a broken heart. She yearned to secure a better history. She wanted their lives to stand for something. She broke down and cried. Wallace wrapped his big hand on her good shoulder. Cindy rested on his arm.

    “My dad always looked out for me.” Cindy wiped her eyes. “Even when we had nothing, he took care of me.” Cindy held back tears. Wallace patted her shoulder.

    “The last thing he said was find Todd Loudin,” Cindy said. “But I was eight and my mother fell apart. She shut down. Our whole family died that day.”

    The nurse rounded the corner. She stopped at Cindy’s bed and began unlocking the wheels.

    “We will head over to x-ray and then a few stitches,” she said. “You can stay here. Won’t be too long.”
    The nurse pointed Wallace to the waiting room. She wheeled Cindy through the doors and they disappeared around the corner.

    To find Todd, Wallace did not need the book. He already knew how to call the man.

    He wondered what Cindy planned to do. Was she looking for a job? If she planned to dance at the strip club, she missed that boat. The Glitter Gulch needed months of repair. Did Todd have something that belonged to her dad?

    He pondered the situation. Cindy let on she needed to talk to Todd about her dad. Did she want revenge? It seemed one possibility. All together Wallace didn’t think Cindy could pull it off.

    He reached into his jacket for his phone. A wad of bills, a pen, and a couple receipts fell out. He stuffed them back in his pocket. He dialed a number and waited.

    “Sam, in two hours meet me at the neon boneyard,” Wallace told his associate. He snapped the phone shut as Cindy rode out into the waiting area.

    “Sorry I took so long,” said the nurse. “She’s all sewed up and ready to go.” The nurse patted Cindy’s hand.  “You must rest dear.” Cindy nodded and smiled.

    “Thank you for waiting,” Cindy said. “I guess you can drop me off.”
    “Where will you go?”
    “The bus station,” she said. “I’m off to my aunt in Utah. I don’t like it here.”
    “Do you have to go right away?” Cindy wondered why Wallace wanted to keep her in Las Vegas.
    “I can arrange a meeting with Mr. Loudin.”

    Cindy sat in the wheelchair and cried. She then jumped out of the chair and hugged Wallace on the neck. He touched her arm and she starting to cry again. Wallace brushed away a tear as a flash of light bounced off the doorway. Cindy stared at the light as Wallace put away his handkerchief.

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  • Cindy's Sin - A Las Vegas Story: Cindy’s Sin – Chapter 7

    Cindy’s Sin – A Las Vegas Story: Cindy’s Sin – Chapter 7

    Paramedics wheeled Charlie out of the club through the mess of wires, broken glass, and water. A medic taped gauze on Cindy’s arm where a bullet broke the skin leaving a bleeding gash. Cuts and scratches covered her legs. “He’s going to live,” Wallace said. “How he didn’t die is anybody’s guess.”

    How they all survived, nobody could tell. A flash of gunpowder played again in Cindy’s mind as the bullet sent a cascade of water over Bill’s head. Then the bullet came toward her and she froze in fear. The bullet threw up bits of cushion and wood behind her. She thought it had missed. However, a shock wave climbed her arm, and she found the bullet had hit her.

    “You’ll need stitches,” a medic said. “I still can’t believe the gunfight happened,” Cindy said. “I might have died.” Cindy smoothed out her dress and tried to cover up her scratches. “I’ll wrap those too.”

    The medic squirted out some cream and moved his fingers over the cuts. His cold hands sent another shock through Cindy. She shivered. He paused. She waved him on and closed her eyes. On this trip, she planned to find the man responsible for her dad’s death, kill him, and escape the desert. Instead, she landed in a shootout and a robbery.

    This pickle couldn’t taste any sourer. Cindy sighed. She had two choices; either give up or figure this out. Walking away took little effort. Staying until she finished the job meant starting over. The whole thing seemed too much to think about.

    Cindy opened her eyes. The club appeared a mess. Tubes of neon glass littered the stage and a blanket lay over Bill’s body. Cindy spotted his right hand before a guy in white coveralls covered all of Bill.

    A ruby ring went around Bill’s thumb. She wondered why she had not picked it out before. She then thought about the leather book and realized Wallace must have hidden the book in his jacket.

    The medic finished her legs. “We should take you to the hospital,” he said. Cindy tried to stand but fell backward into the seat.

    “I think I need to rest more.” Cindy felt faint. She forced a smile. The medic touched her arm. “Let me go get a wheelchair.” He rushed off leaving Cindy alone.

    Wallace and another man stood in the far corner talking. The stranger was bigger than Wallace and wore a black suit that looked tailored. Cindy saw the outline of a revolver hanging beneath his jacket. He poked Wallace on the chest with a big index finger. The man glowered straight into Wallace’s face.

    Wallace turned toward Cindy. He smiled and rolled his eyes. He turned back to the man and moved his arm away. The stranger stepped back waving both hands behind him. Wallace reached into his jacket and handed the man the black book. Cindy jumped forward. He was handing over the key to her world.

    The stranger smiled and placed the book into his jacket. He put out his hand and Wallace gave it a firm shake. The man turned and went out the back door.

    “Your traitor?” Cindy screamed.

    Wallace focused on her face until the medic returned with her wheelchair. She slid into the chair and sat fuming. “That was Loudin’s bodyguard,” Wallace said. “And he wanted the book.”

    Cindy knew Wallace would help her find Todd Loudin, but she said it anyway. “It doesn’t matter,” she shouted. “I will find Mr. Loudin with or without you.”

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