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  • The Spill of Sangria Blood: Dances With The Devil

    Part Three: The Spill of Sangria Blood

    (Torely Stone continues to investigate the death of Tom Dantry by interviewing suspects Jenna Shaw and Rachel Holt. He also comes face-to-face with the killer and pays the price as he dances with the devil in the third part of the novella The Spill of Sangria Blood.)

    Dances with the devil

    The Kokosia Zoo was a sensory overload on this balmy Saturday afternoon. A discord of shrieks—both human and animal—assaulted my ears as I shuffled away from Spinnakers in the middle of the zoo. My nostrils were assaulted by the pungent cocktail of sunscreen, cotton candy, and eau de elephant dung. 

    Everywhere I looked a veritable menagerie of humanity that rivaled the actual zoo inhabitants. Frazzled moms pushed strollers like battering rams, their exhausted expressions a stark contrast to their spawn’s sugar-fueled mania. I narrowly dodged a sticky-fingered toddler on a rampage, his harried mother in hot pursuit.

    “Trevor, no! We do not lick the penguin enclosure!” 

    I snorted, earning a dirty look from Trevor’s mom. Sorry, lady. Your kid’s probably building immunity or something.

    As I meandered past the flamingo pond, I saw a gaggle of single men prowling the pathways. They strutted about like peacocks, eyes darting from animal exhibits to any female that looked vaguely unattached. One bold specimen sidled up to a young woman peering at the warthogs.

    “Hey there. You really like those little guys. Wanna grab a coffee and talk about… warthogs?”

    I cringed at the awkward pickup attempt. The woman’s polite but firm rejection was almost drowned out by a nearby lion’s well-timed roar. 

    Oh to be young and stupid again, I thought to myself. After all my experiences, I still was trying to prove something. I emphasized with the guy and thought about my own bad timings. A lot of failures, with the end of my sheriff career at the top of them. Why is it that no matter all the good you do, you’re only remembered for the failures?

    Dantry’s death had me back in the thick of things. Maybe solving this would land me into real police work? So far, I had no clue about the killer, but “Project Atlas” was pointing me to a motive. What was Dantry hiding and who was involved?

    Jenna was a possibility and so was Rachel Holt. But just because they were women, didn’t mean they weren’t involved. I needed to go over that list in the “Project Atlas” folder. As soon as Winters’ searched Dantry’s office and put it into evidence.

    The lush vegetation lining the walkways provided a brief respite from the my thoughts about the case. I paused beneath a towering eucalyptus, its distinctive aroma mingling with the salty tang of the nearby Pacific. A gentle breeze carried the scent of blooming jasmine, a stark contrast to the earthy musk emanating from the primate enclosures.

    As I continued my walk through the zoo, with its mix of humanity and nature, I couldn’t help thinking that the peacefulness was a far cry from the events of last night. And I wondered if things had settled down or if more monkey business was on the way.

    Winters and crime scene techs were going through Dantry’s office when I showed up to make sure he’d secured the “Project Atlas” folder. He waived for me to join him. Jenna Shaw also was in the room rocking in place and holding a brown day planner.

    “Jenna has something that ties you to Dantry,” Winters reached for the planner. He pointed to an entry. “Looks like you and Dantry were going to meet regarding Project Atlas.”

    I read the entry for myself: “Meet Stone. Discuss Atlas termination.”

    “I have no idea,” I handed back the planner to Winters. “Maybe he planned to bring me into the loop.”

    “Jenna thinks you met with Dantry and didn’t like what he told you. Gives you a motive,” Winters intimated and Jenna agreed by nodding.

    “First off, me and Dantry would have to meet, which didn’t happen. And secondly, I was drinking mojitos when he was killed.” 

    After being shot at and chasing the killer, I was in no mood for Winters’ acting like a jackass. “Let’s go down this safari trail; a better question to ask is where were you Ms. Shaw?”

    Jenna Shaw turned white. “I was home… I went to bed… I had nothing to do with the murder!”

    “You told me Dantry and you were in a relationship.” I threw that little tidbit out to turn the table. Shaw turned fuming mad and beet red.

    “I told you that in confidence,” she shrieked. “You had no right!”

    “I suppose you can provide an alibi for the time of Dantry’s death?” Winters scrutinized Jenna’s face waiting for an answer.

    “Just what I told you: I was home.”

    “My assistant Carrie can back me up on my schedule and whether I met with Dantry or not.” I offered. ”Which sounds a whole lot more than what you’ve got Ms. Shaw.”

    “Dantry came over… and we had a fight. But I didn’t kill him!” Shaw insisted.

    “Sounds like you had motive Ms Shaw.” I caught Winters’ eye and he nodded.

    Jenna Shaw glared at me with the penetrating eyes of a cobra. Winters handcuffed her arms behind her back and led her out of the office. At last we had someone who might have the means for Dantry’s death. If we had motive, was another story. We had to find out the answers when Winters questioned Ms. Shaw.

    After I left Dantry’s office, I wandered down to see Rachel Holt. The head veterinarian was readying to leave her office.

    “Mind if we talk?”

    Dr. Holt’s fingers were fidgeting with the stethoscope around her neck, her eyes darting around the room like a caged animal looking for escape.

      “Dr. Holt,” I said, my voice cutting through the tension. “You and Dantry had some disagreements recently, didn’t you?”

      Rachel’s head snapped up, her eyes meeting mine. “I… we had professional differences, yes.”

      “Professional differences?” I echoed, raising an eyebrow. “Would these ‘differences’ have anything to do with an expansion of the zoo?”

      The color drained from Rachel’s face faster than water from a leaky bucket. “How did you-“

      “I’m head of security, doc. It’s my job to know things.” I leaned in, lowering my voice. “Now, why don’t you tell me what’s really going on?”

      Rachel’s shoulders slumped. “Dantry… his expansion plan focused on breeding endangered species without regard for genetic diversity. It was all about profit, not conservation. I couldn’t stand for it.”

      “Project Atlas was just a plan, right?” I offered to Dr. Holt. She was puzzled.

      “Is that what he was calling it? I never heard the name. He only told me about his plan a few weeks ago.”

      Either she knew more than she was saying about “Project Atlas” or she was clueless. I nodded, filing away the information. Dr. Holt might be hiding something, but her passion was genuine.

      Dr. Holt’s assistant rushed into the office. “We need you. A giraffe is hurt.” Without saying goodbye, Dr. Holt left faster than a gazelle.

      No matter. Winters returned and I caught up on the attack at the Chimpanzee House. Three people stood out; Eli, Miguel, and the fast fellow who led me on a chase all over the zoo before vanishing.

      “Miguel’s going to live and Eli needed some stitches,” Winters said.

      “Why were they hanging out with the chimps?”

      “Turns out they were doing some sleuthing on their own,” Winters explained. “They recognized arguing and thought it might be the murderer.” 

      “And the dart guns?”

      “Eli says he grabbed one in the veterinary office behind the chimps for protection,” Winters stated. “Sounds like they needed it.”

      I pondered what Winters told me.

      “We aren’t any closer to solving this.”

      “Well, maybe Ms. Shaw can fill in some cracks.”

      Jenna Shaw sat alone in the interrogation room as Winters wandered in with the “Project Atlas” folder and a cup of coffee. He offered the cup to her as I watched them through the observation window.

      “Do you want an attorney?” he asked.

      “No. Nothing I say will connect me to Dantry’s murder.”

      Winters started with some basic questions that led to Shaw’s fight with Dantry.

      “What was the fight about?” Winters quizzed Shaw who tapped her fingers on the metal table. She offered nothing.

      “Let’s talk about Project Atlas, shall we?”

      A sharp intake of breath.

      “I don’t recognize what you’re talking about,” she replied, her voice wavering.

      Winters chuckled darkly. “Cut the crap, sweetheart. You and Dantry were more than just colleagues, weren’t you? What got you so mad you killed him for it?”

      “I didn’t kill him. Although I wanted to.” Shaw shouted. “He was never going to leave his wife… so I ended it.”

      That didn’t make sense. Dantry was a bachelor. I was sure of it.

      “You sound like a woman scorned,” Winters scoffed. “I suppose you’re going to tell me now you just amicably ended it?”

      “Yes. And then he left.” Shaw replied. “We were supposed to go to the ballet. I still had the tickets, so I went alone.”

      This was new information and took the wind out of my sails.

      “You can prove you went to the ballet?” demanded Winters.

      “I met up with Dr. Finkle and his wife Mary. We stayed for the performance and then had drinks. I didn’t get home until after 1.”

      Winters left the interrogation room and I met him in the hallway.

      “If the Finkle’s confirm she was with them, she has an alibi.” Winters declared. “With an alibi we’re back to square one.”

      “Listen, Dantry was a bachelor,” I pressed. “So, I can’t figure out this mysterious wife.”

      Winters shrugged and went into the interrogation room to release her.

      As I stood alone in the hallway, all I could think about was we were at the beginning. All we had was a folder covered in lipstick and perfume, and two female suspects who looked like they didn’t do it. 

      Shaw had said she and Dantry were having an affair and he wasn’t going to leave his wife. My friend Dantry was a bachelor, so Shaw related another thing that didn’t make any sense. The only thing that did make sense was Dantry was dead and we were no closer to pinning the killer. 

    The sheriff’s office was nothing like I remembered; it was cleaner and modern. The waiting area resembled a hotel lobby. The walls, once adorned with the weathered faces of sheriffs past, now gleamed with sterile white paint. A single photo hung in solitary splendor – an official-looking photo of Sheriff Shelton. All the deputies behind the counter were new and no one recognized me. So much for legacy; no one would pat me on the back if they wanted to.

    I absently pushed through the glass doors into the bright afternoon sun. The courthouse square spread out before me, a patchwork of old and new. The sandwich shop where I’d spent countless lunch breaks still stood, but now it was flanked by a trendy coffee bar and a vegan bakery. Next to them was the park where I often ate my sandwich. 

    Uneven brick paver stones made up the streets around the courthouse square and they were just as worn. I took it all in; lawyers, defendants, and family walked around me conducting business with the county. I couldn’t help but think; they all were animals out on furlough waiting to be put back in their cages.

    “Speaking of cages,” I laughed to myself. “I’d better get back to mine.” I stepped off the curb and reached for my fob to enter the car. 

      That’s when I sensed it – a faint whistle cutting through the air. Before I could react, something pinged off the car roof. A dart clattered to the sidewalk, its needle glinting in the sunlight. Stunned pedestrians quickly moved away. I turned in the direction of the shooter. I didn’t see anyone except a line of people in front of the sandwich shop. 

      I dropped to the ground, my aging knees protesting. Another dart whizzed past, lodging itself between the car’s window and door frame.

      “What the hell?” I growled, scanning the rooftops for the unseen assailant.

      My heart pounded in my chest as I army-crawled to a nearby planter. The paver bricks bit into my palms, a grim reminder that I was too old for this crap.

    I ducked close to the paver bricks. They were warm. That’s my last full memory as a sharp sting bloomed between my shoulder blades. The warmth spread out across my body as the sedative dribbled from the tip of the dart. Heat waves billowed up around me.

      “Ah, shi-” I managed to slur before darkness claimed me, leaving me sprawled ungracefully in front of the courthouse like a discarded mannequin.

    I groaned and pried my eyelids open, faced with sterile beige walls closing in around me. My head felt like it had been stuffed with cotton and then run over by a steamroller. My tongue was fuzzy and swollen as if I had swallowed a kiwi. Blinking away the fog, I made out three figures hovering over me: Winters’ craggy face, Carrie’s concerned frown, and… wait, was that Mary?

      “What the hell?” I croaked, my voice raspy. “Sis, what are you doing here?”

      Mary leaned in, her familiar scent of lavender and worry washing over me. “Oh, Torely. Thank God you’re awake. I came as soon as Carrie called me.”

      I tried to sit up, but my limbs fell like lead weights. “Heard what? Last thing I remember, I was…” The memory slipped away like sand through my fingers.

      Carrie placed a gentle hand on my arm. “You were hit with a tranquilizer dart. You’ve been out cold for hours.”

      “Jesus,” I muttered. “Someone’s taking this game of darts way too seriously.”

      Winters stepped forward, his face grim. “This is no game, Stone. The killer is closing in, and they want you six feet under.”

      I attempted a sardonic laugh, but it came out more like a wheeze. “Well, aren’t I the popular one? And here I thought my charm was wearing off.”

      Mary’s eyes welled up with tears. “Torely, please. This isn’t funny. You need to let the police handle this investigation before it’s too late.”

      I took a deep breath, wincing at the dull ache in my back where the tranquilizer dart had struck. “Look, the fact that someone’s trying to take me out means I must be close to cracking this case. They want me dead because I’m a threat.”

      Carrie’s eyebrows knitted together, her usual cool demeanor cracking. “That’s not exactly comforting, boss. You’re not invincible.”

      “Trust me, I’m well aware,” I muttered, gesturing to my current state. “But think about it. Why go to all this trouble if I wasn’t onto something?”

      Winters crossed his arms, his weathered face a mask of concern. “It’s a hell of a risk you’re taking, Stone. We can’t even tell who we’re up against.”

      I managed a wry smile. “That’s the thing about mysteries, detective. You don’t know until you do.”

      Mary grabbed my hand, her grip tight. “Torely, please. Find another way.”

      I squeezed her hand back, my throat tightening. “I wish I could, sis. But sometimes, you’ve got to dance with the devil to catch him.”

      The room fell silent again, tension thick enough to cut with a knife. I could feel their worry, their fear. Part of me wanted to give in, to walk away and leave this godforsaken case behind. But I knew I couldn’t. Not when I was this close to unmasking a killer.

      “So,” I said, mustering as much bravado as I could, “who’s up for a little game of cat and mouse?” Though I was not entirely sure which one I was at this point.

    (Part 4 Coming November 7, 2024)

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  • Dirty Politics

    Dirty Politics

    “My opponent is a liar. And I approve this message.”

    “What do we know about this guy?”

    “Nothing much. He does know a liar when he sees one.”

    “How do we know he’s not lying.”

    “Why would he?”

    “Because his opponent says he’s a liar.”

    “Is it possible they are both lying?”

    “Maybe that’s how you know it’s dirty politics.”

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  • My Stroke: Recovery and Graduation

    My Stroke: Recovery and Graduation

    I suffered a stroke on July 15, 2015.

    One eye was bigger than the other and I was paralyzed in an altering pattern; my left face was numb, my right arm was numb, and my left leg was numb. Not the usual pattern for a stroke. Yay, me. Always having to be different.

    Thankfully, I could still understand others, listen, and sit up. Unfortunately, I was unable to walk without falling down, read, watch television, concentrate, write, type, or speak in a linear sentence. To give you an idea, I spoke in fragments of Verb, Object, Subject, so a normal sentence might have come out “Walking around the park I went.” Yes, very Yoda-like.

    I resigned myself to a life of being unable to do my job as a writer and communicator. It seemed like the only thing to do. Sit in my bed and hope for the best.

    After a week, they sent me to the rehabilitation wing. The key was they didn’t take no for an answer. I had to start walking even though the whole hallway was tilted at a 90-degree angle. Just try to walk. I fell over most of the time with a guy shouting at me to get up and try again. It was the closet I’ve come to football two-a-days.

    I tried wearing an eye patch to tilt the world upright. It didn’t work. So, I spent my time after my three-hours of rehab focusing on bringing the TV from vertical to horizontal. I didn’t really care to watch TV; I used the picture as a guide to tilt it back counterclockwise 90-degrees.

    After a week, the TV was close to horizontal. It was slightly askew to the right, but it was close enough. Walking started to improve and I could stumble down the hall without running into the wall.

    Walking became jumping over cones and then balancing on one leg. It was tedious and not as fun as learning how to walk as a toddler.

    I took forever to climb a flight of stairs. You had to learn how to climb stairs before you went home. I couldn’t drag my left leg up and had to spend hours working on accomplishing this task.

    They tried to teach me how to type again and that was quite a challenge. I knew I could touch type but I couldn’t make my fingers work as fast as my brain. I never really accomplished this at the rehab hospital.

    After three weeks of rehabilitation, I could go home after my stroke. I still couldn’t walk without help and the entire world was super bright and out of focus. I went home and decided I could at least feed myself. I was feeling sorry for myself and depressed. Stroke recovery seemed like a bad way to end up at 52

    My wife decided I wasn’t going to sit around. You know those books we all used in the first grade to learn cursive? Darla brought those home and insisted I practice writing my letters. Big block letters and puzzles for 7-year-old’s filled each page.

    I traced letters, then started making words. I must have written out my own name hundreds of times.

    Once I could write words, I tried to write sentences. Thankfully, they started to make sense and followed Subject-Verb-Object. I was closer to returning to writing for a living.

    I then started pecking at the keyboard. I had to look at the keys and felt much like I did in my first typing class. It was taking a long time and I kept hitting the wrong keys. I never would return to 45-words a minute. I was more like 10-words a minute.

    Still, I made progress and decided I could return to work and I made a goal of writing something everyday. Soon I decided to write short stories online and averaged 500 words everyday writing short stories and poems. I wrote a short novelette Cindy’s Sin, a collection of short stories, some poems, and published them on Amazon.

    Four years later and I am making plans for a novel. I thought about my journey when I started editing some of my short stories. Some of my writing is good and some needs some work.

    But isn’t that what being a writer is all about? I look forward to the future and honestly think I am finally close to where I was before the stroke.

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  • Scribble – June 26, 2019

    Scribble – June 26, 2019

    The Scribble Gremlin does not shut my website down until I am preparing to write. If I hit, New Post, it always takes me to a 503 Error when I’m ready to hit my stride.

    Okay, It almost never happens unless I attempt to sit down and write. Or maybe, I’m just sensitive.

    ~

    I took a walk today in the 105-degree afternoon with my handy portable water sprayer. I walked fast and yet still sprayed my face until all the water evaporated before I returned to my desk. I may need a side bottle. Or, be lazy and wait until it’s only 90-degrees outside.

    Many people hanging out at the Silver and Gold Pawn Shop. Chumlee must have been in the house.

    ~

    I fell into an old habit again and started telling rather than showing. I wandered around giving the backstory until I realized even I found this story boring. Always get right to the action!

    What would you rather read? Multiple paragraphs about why the main character summered in a particular place, enjoys cold iced tea, sometimes fishes, and oh, the sunsets sure are pretty this time of year. Or, would you rather the main character stick his hand into the rotting chest of a dead person?

    Just what I thought. The struggle is real folks. Real.

    ~

    I finished the first season of True Detective last night. An excellent example of having a theme and returning to it at the end. Great writing. Why did it take so long? There is only so much time in the evening and that is taken up by Lucifer (the show on Netflix).

    ~

    Found my old records hiding in a closet. Currently listening to Trick Pony, Nanci Griffith, and The Desert Rose Band.

    ~

    Off to write and design the July Employee Newsletter.

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  • Scribble, June 21, 2019

    Scribble, June 21, 2019

    Are you dead?

    Uh, no.

    However, it seems so because I have written nothing random in a few months. It feels longer. Anyway, someone on Medium suggested I should turn back and post a few random thoughts on my blog.

    Good idea!

    I started writing my Scribbles to start the day. As you might recall, I’m a huge fan of Ernest Hemingway. In fact, I’m reading The Old Man and the Sea for the umpteenth time. He used to wake up, according to stories, put a blank sheet in the typewriter, and type anything he could think of. Sort of his way to purge out the alcohol and cobwebs.

    I started these Scribbles as my way of shrugging off cobwebs (I don’t drink anywhere as near as Hemingway) and to put in my 500 daily words.

    In the beginning, it was a struggle to come up with 500 words of anything creative. I often sat here at the screen thinking.

    Lately, I’ve been deep into writing another Jake Rutledge adventure and since I know nothing about alligator farming, I’m doing research. Actually, I have written much and need a feel for the bayou. I probably need a vacation! I’ll head out there when it’s not 100 degrees in 100 percent humidity.

    I am also working on another novelette about a retired sheriff who has to solve a murder at the zoo he now works at. And then there is my real job and the press releases I write.

    Fun stuff!

    I still don’t know who reads this, other than my critique partners and beta readers, and it doesn’t bother me much. I write for myself and for my job. Hopefully, someone is learning something or feeling my inspiration.

    Not that I don’t like feedback: you can always chime in with a comment! However, I’m content. Thanks for reading.

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  • The Man of Her Dreams

    The Man of Her Dreams

    Image by William Dais from Pixabay

    Waslken pointed the pod toward a bright spot on the blue marble and rode the adrenaline rush as the planet’s atmosphere burned off bumpy mollusks clinging to his spaceship. The ship emerged shiny and clean cruising into a dusky sky opposite the glow of space. He recalibrated his descent and selected a dark spot away from the city lights.

    A flash lit up Katie’s bedroom, bouncing off the porcelain dolls, the softball trophies, and the posters of Joan Jett, Kiss, and a dozen smaller photos of male teens with guitars. The light lasted long enough for her to see her knees wobble. Then it went out, and she sat alone listening to a cricket. The night air now smelled of burning metal. Awake, she grabbed a flashlight and climbed out her window.

    Waslken settled his craft on the dirt next to the farmhouse, extinguished the rockets under the pod, and opened the nose. An octopus, the spaceship wrapped around him like a Coke bottle. He contracted his body and pushed out in a whoosh. He plopped onto the ground to rest.

    Katie watched the cone open, and she stared in awe. In her comic books, first contact never happened to girls in high school. She giggled with excitement. However, when the octopus leapt from the ship she screamed.

    Waslken took a minute to recover from the rigor of leaping from the craft. Then he heard the high-pitched wail. At that moment, he scanned the screaming creature’s memories and found a more pleasing shape to present himself. He transformed into a brooding male teen with long blonde hair and a ripped muscle shirt. He stood at the base carrying a red guitar.

    In her surprise, Katie closed her eyes tight, dropped the flashlight, and crumpled to her knees. After a moment of silence, she peeked and found the heartthrob she idolized standing under the rocket. Katie forgot her fears. She screamed again in joy and ran towards the teen carrying the flaming guitar.

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  • Improving Your Chances of Receiving an Honest Book Review

    Improving Your Chances of Receiving an Honest Book Review

    When you became an author, you probably did it to pass on a message or a grand universe to a reader. Writing was a passion and you couldn’t wait until the final edit and the published book.

    No where in your dreams did you believe you would also be the publicist and marketer of the book.

    Although, that is the reality of the author in modern times. Even if the book reaches a top publisher, the writer must market the book and get good reviews.

    Reviews, preferably four and five stars, make or break a new book and new author. If no one reads the book, there will be no reviews. And if there are no reviews, then no one will read the book.

    Quite the Schroeder’s Cat(“Die Gegenwärtige Situation in Der Quantenmechanik” n.d.) paradox.

    So, how do you collect reviews and put yourself out there to be read?

    Start with the End

    The best place to ask for a review is at the end of the book. Place a well-drafted request from the reader to leave an honest review of the book. Not everyone will like the book, which is for another topic on How to Take Criticism, but a fair share of readers will like your novel and will want to heap on the praise.

    Smart authors always add a book review request, often with a link to the direct page where they want you to leave it. If the reader purchased the book at an online store, send them to the book page to leave a review.

    Reviews help other readers decide if it’s worth their money and time to purchase and read a book. And on the other side of that, lots of good reviews mean more sales for authors. You should encourage your readers to leave reviews by including a call to action at the end of your book, and there are other ways to obtain honest reviews too.

    Ask Readers and Other Authors for Help

    Book communities, such as Goodreads, exist to talk about new books and authors. And there are plenty of places to find a reader who will offer an honest review. Also,many book bloggers need of a fresh topic or book to review. All you have to do is contact them. If you are doing a blog book tour, some of those bloggers might be willing to review your book on their site and even add a shorter version to Amazon on Goodreads.

    Other authors definitely understand the importance of reviews for exposing a book to readers, so don’t be shy about offering them a free copy of your manuscript in exchange for a honest review.(“Why the Right Book Reviews Are So Important for Authors” 2016) They usually want to help out a fresh author because somebody probably helped them in the beginning too.

    The List is Life

    If you are a new author, you should have been working on a mailing list – subscribers, fans, or past readers – to build your author profile. Always consider your list as a ready-made tool to build momentum for your book.

    Email your list and ask your subscribers to read the book and leave an honest review. You might even want to segment your list so that those who don’t add a review after the first email will receive a second reminder.

    Whatever you do, don’t sound desperate. People tend to avoid authors who beg. Just tell them you have a new book, maybe the second book in a series, and offer them a discount in they leave an honest review. Let them know that they can help other readers find your book by leaving a review.

    Ask the Mighty Oz for Help

    Research the world of Amazon to find people who review many types of books in your genre and then contact them. If they have already reviewed one of your books, then you have a leg up on other authors. Ask these reviewers if they would write a review for you.

    You can give them a PDF or other type file free to read in exchange for it, or if you are enrolled in the KDP Program, you can make the book FREE for a limited time.

    Make sure to add “an honest review” into the text because Amazon will penalize you if it looks like you are ‘buying reviews.’ You can find reviewers here: http://www.amazon.com/review/top-reviewers.

    1. “Die Gegenwärtige Situation in Der Quantenmechanik.” n.d. SpringerLink. Accessed April 4, 2019. https://doi.org/10.1007/BF01491891.
    2. “Why the Right Book Reviews Are So Important for Authors.” 2016. The Write Life. April 21, 2016. https://thewritelife.com/why-the-right-book-reviews-are-so-important-for-authors/.
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  • Creative Ways to Defeat Writer’s Block

    Creative Ways to Defeat Writer’s Block

    Sometimes writing flows out of your pen like turning on a faucet. Other times, the words fail to drip out of the spout. When Writer’s Block hits, it has nothing to do with writing. It has to do with thinking. So to combat Writer’s Block, you have to tackle Thinker’s Block.

    Writer’s Block is as much about confidence and dedication as anything else. And, all writers deal with blocks sometimes. But there is hope. Let’s take a look at the problem and find some useful ways to defeat Writer’s Block:

    • Stick to your writing schedule—Unless it’s a real emergency, stick to your writing schedule no matter what. There will be times when you don’t feel like it. Write anyway. This is an investment in yourself!

    Just start writing anything. Random thoughts, your dream from last night, activities in your window, a sentence about something you’re reading, or an idea you’ve been pondering. The habit of writing must be done everyday. By writing something else, you prove you can write, and will be able to tackle the project you need to work on.

    • Chose a writing atmosphere—If you work all day at a desk, you may find that you can’t get into a writing groove mindset at a desk. Since writing a book is a creative endeavor, even if you are writing a non-fiction book, consider the environment that will motivate your creative thinking. Or change it up! Leave your writing space and see if that helps open up the lock. A fresh change of scenery can often be enough to get you started again.

    • Outline—If you have even a basic outline, you’ll know where you are heading, so there’s less chance of getting stuck. Writer’s block often comes in the form of not knowing where to go next. Always outline a book even if you plan to pants the plot. You need to know when you will hit key plot points, action, or tension. Your outline should be flexible, but having one can keep you in the flow of writing so you don’t need to stop and make tough choices while writing the book. Also, if you’re following an outline, you can write those parts you feel comfortable with and return to the hard scenes later.

    • Trade tasks—if the words are just nowhere to be found, switch tasks. Do another task on your list for a while and move your writing time to the time designated for that task. It’s just a trade-off, not a sellout. You’ll still write, but changing tasks can get you in the flow so the words flow more smoothly when you do go back to writing.


    Read more: Creative Ways to Defeat Writer’s Block
  • 25 Writing Tips for Writers and Bloggers

    25 Writing Tips for Writers and Bloggers

    Writing tips for writers seem to pile up on the screen. I too have seen my fair share of tips. However, these are the ones I take to heart:

    Start Writing on a Daily Basis
    The more you write the better you will become at writing. So, it just makes sense that you want to get into the habit of writing every day. You don’t have to start writing pages upon pages each day. Your goal is to form the habit where you sit down at your computer and start typing words into a document or notepad.

    You can write about anything. For example, you may want to write about your activities the day before. Start mapping out a business plan or outline blog posts. Write about anything that gets you into the habit of actually writing. You may even want to practice writing short posts which you could then use as content for your social sites. It may be difficult at first to write every day. Just remember, as with any habit, if you commit to doing this daily you will be writing regularly in less than one month.

    Start Reading on a Daily Basis
    The more you read the better you writing ability will be. Plus, by reading you will be keeping up to date on current affairs and topics. This will provide you with useful insights and topics that you can write about on your own blog.

    It also helps to read a good variety of content and material. Don’t just limit yourself to reading a magazine or book. Get into the habit of reading newspapers, short stories, blog articles and more. Take the time to read up on a new hobby or skill that you have always wanted to learn.
    By exposing your mind to a variety of content your vocabulary will expand. You will find that the task of writing becomes easier. Plus, you will find that you have more topics on which you can write about.

    Write in a Comfortable Place
    If you are seriously trying to write a long article or even start a book you need to have a comfortable place to work in. This will vary depending upon your personality. Some writers enjoy writing in a quiet room at home, others prefer to write outdoors when possible. Yet other writers find they get inspired and can write more when sitting at a local coffee shop or restaurant.

    No matter where you choose to write, find a place that works for you. If you have small children or a busy schedule you may prefer to get up earlier and use that time for writing.

    By placing yourself in a comfortable setting you will find that your words flow easily. If your body is not in a comfortable place then neither is your mind.

    Write for Your Audience
    When it comes to writing online content for the internet your biggest concern is that you will want to cut out all the fluff and padding of your work. While it is still important to pay attention to your use of grammar, spelling and punctuation your main concern is to keep your writing concise.

    It is still important to develop a style so that your audience can identify with you. You will want to aim your writing at a general level. This means not using overly long or difficult words and talking to your reader as though you were writing to a friend.

    With the emergence of the internet writing styles are definitely more relaxed than ever before. It is still important to maintain a professional quality of your work so that you can brand yourself as an expert in your niche.

    Use Complete Sentences
    While writing for the internet requires you to be friendlier, you still need to write correct sentences. Your sentence structure should be complete and concise. An example of an incomplete sentence is when you suddenly place the word ‘when’ at the beginning.

    The use of this word makes a statement incomplete such as in the following example:

    When I complete this project.
    Instead you should write:
    I completed this project.

    If you use an online spelling and grammar checker an incomplete sentence will be referred to as a fragmented sentence.

    Because online writing rules are viewed as more relaxed it is okay to break the rules now and again. You will notice that a lot of online content will have sentences that start with the words ‘and because’. This was definitely something that any good English teacher would tell you is not correct. But now it is viewed as acceptable.

    Research Your Topic
    Before you sit down and write you want to take the time to research your topic. This is extremely important with web based content. Always keep in mind that internet users are looking for current information and facts.
    By researching first, you will have timely facts and information that you automatically include in your blog posts and articles. By taking the time to research, your content is more likely to be shown as relevant content in the search engines. What this means is that your posts, pages and articles are more likely to show up in the top results in any search engine.
    Once you have compiled your research you will be able to easily create a good outline for your topic. You may even find that the direction you first had in mind has changed. Researching can help you discover new and unique angles that you had not thought of.

    Use Current Events for Blog Posts
    If you want to consistently create good content for your niche then it is imperative that you stay up to date with what is happening in your niche. This can be done by subscribing to other blogs in your niche by using an RSS Reader. Then simply get into the habit of checking your reader each morning for important news.

    This has a dual purpose for you as a writer. Firstly, you will be staying on top of all of the latest news developments and gossip in your industry. Secondly this ‘news’ can easily provide you with a list of ongoing topics for you to write about.

    Other ways to stay on top of news is by creating Google Alerts and by checking sites such as Google News regularly. Don’t forget to subscribe to top blogs in your field as they can help inspire topic ideas.

    Create an Outline
    If you find that you often get stuck writing a complete blog post or article have you considered using an outline? This technique allows you to simply fill in the outline, once created, in a step by step process. Once filled in your basic article is completed. Using an outline simplifies the writing process and makes it easy for you to create quick and informative posts.

    A good outline includes:

    1. Introduction
    2. Body
    3. Conclusion

    In the introduction you will basically tell the reader what they are going to learn by reading your article or post.

    In the body of your article make a list of the points or sub topics that you want to discuss. These points will become the sub headings of your article. After you have outlined your points you go back and write a couple of sentences on each one. This becomes the body of your article.

    Once you get to the conclusion you simply wrap up and summarize the main points again. Then add a call to action for your reader and your new post is ready for publication.

    Keep a Notepad for Ideas
    It can be extremely helpful to always carry a notepad or book of some kind with you. This way if you suddenly come up with great ideas for a story, blog post, article, report or book you can scribble away to your heart’s content.

    Notepads are great for using to brain storm ideas and thoughts. They are perfect for using at any time and you can even revert to a good old-fashioned notepad and paper. How many times have you suddenly come up with great ideas and had nowhere to write them down? By the time you reach home or sit at your computer your ideas are long gone.

    You can use any type of notepad for this and several online notes can be synched across all of your devices these days. Evernote is one good example of this.

    Use a Mind Mapping Tool
    If you liked the idea of using an outline then you are going to love using mind mapping tools for writing. A mind mapping tool is great for outlining individual posts and articles as well as for creating a blogging schedule.
    You can use this tool to plan out content for months at a time. Come up with main topics and then add sub topics to your list. As well as listing sub topics you can list research sources and jot down ideas.
    When you go back into your mind map you can add additional notes and thoughts. Before you know it, you will have basic content outlined for several blog posts at a time.

    A great feature of mind mapping software is the ability to add colored nodes so you can easily identify topics, research and specific outlines.

    Write in Short Spurts
    Use a kitchen timer or download an online timer to your desktop and then use it. Most writers will agree that it is better to write in short spurts, rather than sit down for hours at one time.

    There are several benefits of writing in short spurts including not cramping up your fingers and wrists from over typing, and not feeling overwhelmed or frustrated when your words do not flow.

    Quite often taking a break frees up your mind and relaxes your body. When you sit down again to resume writing you will feel refreshed and ready to take action. You should notice that your writing flows easily and that you actually feel more creative.

    Experiment with how often to take breaks and see what works for you. Most people tend to find that taking a 10-minute break once every hour is extremely effective.

    Develop Compelling Headlines & Titles
    With any type of writing which is going to be published online you want to take the time to come up with compelling headlines. A good headline will attract your website visitor’s attention immediately, and this will entice them to read the entire article.

    When writing your headline or title do not use all capital letters in it and avoid using punctuation. If you place a full stop or period at the end of your headline it will make the reader want to stop reading. By eliminating this punctuation your reader is more likely to continue reading your full article.

    Examples of great titles are:

    • Titles that ask questions or provoke opinions
    • How to titles
    • Step by Step titles
    • Titles which stir feelings in your reader

    When writing content, for online purposes, you want to try and include keywords in your titles. This will help boost your content within the search engines. Place yourself in your reader’s shoes and think of how you would search for this particular information. Then try to include these terms into your titles, headlines and sub titles.

    Short Sentences Work Best for Online Content
    When writing online content, you want to avoid long sentences. It is much better to write your content in short and concise sentences. This way you can offer your readers easy to understand information which is well thought out.

    In addition, keep your paragraphs fairly short. It is important to understand that when someone is reading an article, post or website content online, they often scan the content first. This is why it is important to make use of sub titles and formatting techniques such as lists and bullet points. These things will catch the readers eye, pulling them in, and making them want to read more.

    Practice writing short sentences with no added fluff. If you find that your sentences are extremely long, work on adding commas into the sentence structure. Then read your sentence aloud. If your sentence still sounds and feels long winded then try splitting into two shorter sentences.

    Use a Friendly Tone of Voice When Writing on Your Blog
    Conversational and friendly tones work best when writing online content. Use a passive voice in your writing. An example of this is:

    The graphic designer was hired by our company.

    Instead use:

    We hired the graphic designer.

    When writing for your blog write as though you are chatting with your best friend or family member, someone that you know well. When you write in this manner your content becomes friendlier and adds that human touch.
    A common problem with the internet is that a website often blocks the human element. Sometimes a reader doesn’t really know who has written the content and this adds distance.

    By writing in a friendly manner you are forming a relationship with your reader and they in turn will learn to know, like and trust you more. This is extremely important for connecting long term readership for your blog.

    Write to Attract Attention
    This follows on from our last writing tip which covered writing in a friendly manner. With online content it is important to understand that your website visitor is looking for something. This could be the answer to a particular question or information on a particular subject. In essence they are looking for a solution to a problem.

    You need to provide them with the solution and this solution must be evident quickly. Most website visitors will scan your page and if they don’t find what they are looking for, will leave in under 10 seconds.

    This is why it is important to attract their attention immediately. This can be done by creating compelling headlines, using sub heading and lists. If the visitor thinks you may have the answer they are more likely to stick around and read the rest of your content.

    Include Lists and Step by Step Tutorials
    When creating content, you can make your content easier to read and more attractive by making use of lists and step by step tutorials. This offers several benefits including making your content more appealing to visitors. Instead of being faced with a long article they immediately see that your content is short and easy to read.

    You can list main points and use bullet points or numbers to make them stand out on your page. As we mentioned earlier readers on the internet are in the habit of scanning content rather than reading every word in detail. So, using short points can help them identify if your content is what they are looking for.

    Creating how to and step by step tutorials you are offering your readers a different type of content. If your article is dealing with how to learn something new then consider writing out in point or step form.

    Structure Your Content
    Structuring your content includes taking the time to think about the topic that you are writing about. You don’t want to go rambling on about nothing in particular. Instead come up with a specific idea or subject and discuss that on your blog.

    By talking about one thing at a time you will have the ability to write clear and concise articles. These will be informative posts that will engage your readers in a friendly manner.

    To do this effectively you should get into the habit of writing out the main points of your article. Then go back and start explaining or discussing each one in a single paragraph. By the time you have filled in all of this information all that is left is your closing paragraph.

    The last paragraph is normally a quick recap of what the reader has just learned. Plus it should include a call to action. This could be sign up to a newsletter or to receive a free gift or it could be to purchase a recommended product.

    Use Clear Language
    One of the biggest mistakes you can make when it comes to writing online content is to use fancy language. This can be a foreign concept to many writers, but believe me your readers will appreciate clear and easy to understand language.

    Only use technical terminology when required. If you are writing a white paper for university graduates then you will, of course, use different language as compared to writing for young adults.

    As well as not using fancy or technical jargon you don’t want to add fluff to your content. While adding descriptiveness to stories and fiction is good, it is not always appropriate for shorter pieces of content.

    If you are in the habit of writing colorful content, try going back and removing unnecessary words and expressions. Make a point of keeping each sentence clear and to the point. If you stray off topic simply remove the section.

    Use Summaries
    A summary is basically a quick recap of what your article or post is about. You are actually telling the reader what you have just told them! A good summary consists of one good paragraph and this summary can be used to describe your article as well. Learning how to write a good summary is important if you want to submit articles to article directories for example.
    As you gain experience with crafting summaries you will also be improving your copywriting skills. So, when it is time to write a sales page you will have an easier time of coming up with shorter sentences to reflect benefits and key points.

    If you condense your summary even further, into 150 characters, this becomes the sentence that is displayed by the search engines when your website shows up on the results page.

    Include Images and Graphics
    There is one major difference to writing online content and that is the use of images, graphics and photographs. Images can really help make your content visually appealing and entices the reader to actually stay on your site and read your content.

    When using images try to use images that relate to what your article is about. Plus, with the increased popularity of social media sites, people love sharing images. This can help get your content more views and website traffic. Try to use images that people can ‘pin’ to sites like Pinterest.
    Images and photographs help to break up long articles and make them appear shorter and easier to read. It is very easy to insert images into a document, just use the insert feature in Word. Plus, you can then use the Picture tools to add a border, color or special effects to your images.

    Remember an image help draw the reader’s eye to the page and compels them to continue reading. If you aren’t in the habit of adding images try using some in your next article.

    Make Use of White Space
    When you write content that you wish to post on your website it is important to take the visual appearance of the piece into consideration. You don’t want to publish a long article that is all text and very little else. Immediately visitors view this as ‘boring’, and they will click away without bothering to read it.

    While you can still publish long articles, you can make them look less ‘boring’ by breaking the piece up into smaller sections. One way to do this is to write smaller paragraphs. When you have more paragraphs, whiter space appears on your site. This has the effect of making your article look smaller and easier to read.

    Including headings and sub titles also goes a long way in helping to break up your content. The more manageable your content appears, the more readers you will attract. If your article is extremely long you may want to consider breaking into 2 or 3 smaller posts and then link to each one at the end of the article.

    Include a Call to Action
    When writing articles that are to be published online you normally want the reader to perform some type of action after reading it. This action is referred to as a Call to Action. It can include having your reader click on a buy button, liking or sharing your post or giving up their email address in exchange for a gift.

    If you don’t tell your reader what you want them to do at the end of your article they will simply click away. Instead it is important to lead your reader somewhere.

    To achieve this, you want to make your call to action very clear. If you want them to sign up for your newsletter, tell them how to do it. If the required action is to click a link put the link there for them to click on!

    By including a call to action your conversion rates will increase as will your profit margin. Don’t expect people to know what action you want them to take, instead show them!

    Write, Read, Edit, Proofread and then Repeat
    Get into the habit of writing your content and then letting it sit at least overnight. This way when you open it up again to reread and edit it you can pick up on errors easily. Do not simply write and publish your content without proof reading it.

    While many programs such as Word and Open Office do come with built in spell checking systems, these are not always that accurate. Instead you want to get into the habit of editing and proof reading, then rewriting if necessary before going back and proof reading again.

    When editing and proof reading your work do so with an open mind and pay attention to the small details. It can be so easy to overlook words by reading too fast. Instead read slowly and carefully. If you find yourself faltering over a sentence and have to read it more than once, stop and fix the sentence.

    Don’t be Scared to Cut & Rewrite
    By letting your content sit before it is published you can reread it with fresh eyes. If you are not totally happy with it take the time to cut out sections and do re- writes if needed.

    Remember whatever you publish online becomes associated with you. If you are trying to brand yourself and your business, then publishing informative and thought-provoking content is vital.

    You should feel proud of any piece of content which you create. Try asking yourself if this is something that you would want to read, it should be!

    At this stage in the game you want to watch for certain words that you repeat often. When this happens try to look for alternative word choices that can help liven up your work. One easy way to do this is by using the synonym and thesaurus features in programs such as Microsoft Word. This is a really way to change your work without having to do major rewrites or cuts.

    Voice Your Opinions
    Don’t be worried about voicing your opinions when you write. Of course, you may not want to become too controversial on certain topics. But there is nothing wrong with voicing your thoughts and opinions on any subject.

    By doing this you could easily create content that becomes a little controversial. This type of content is enjoyed by many people, especially on social sites. They love to add their own opinion before sharing with their friends. You content could easily go viral and receive thousands of views.
    By voicing your opinions, you are opening the floor to allowing your readers to add their own thoughts and comments. This can be a fantastic thing, and can help you receive hundreds of extra readers to your blog. Many super blog conversations have been conducted in the comments section.

    Read more: 25 Writing Tips for Writers and Bloggers
  • The Stoic Guide to Creative Writing 

    The Stoic Guide to Creative Writing 

    The ancient philosophy of stoicism rarely, if ever, comes up when talking about creative writing. However, maybe it should be mentioned. Story creating requires a writer to develop characters, plot, twists, and torment all within the confines of an unpredictable world. Stoicism teaches individuals to concentrate their thoughts and actions in world full of unpredictable events. The two sound pretty similar.

    I plot out my stories and then pants my way through them. Meaning, I generally know how and when something will happen to make the story meet certain beats and required elements. I pants how the character will react to an event. For those unaware of the lingo, plotters lay out the entire story beforehand; pantsers tend to ramble and just go with the flow.

    Stoic logic requires individuals to accept events as they occur. They must then deduct what should happen next. As you accept moments as they present themselves you develop self-control to keep emotions from destroying your world.

    Writers using stoic philosophy work to keep their main characters in deduction mode; they use reason to apply knowledge to a story plot point.

    Still following me?

    In a nutshell, it is my job as the author to help the main character make choices based on reason rather then emotion. I can’t let my detective or heroine let external events cloud their mind or choose their behavior.

    I plan to take this further. I’d love the hear from you. What do you think? Does stoicism affect your stories?

    Read more: The Stoic Guide to Creative Writing