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  • A Visitor Awaits

    A Visitor Awaits

    Bolsón de Mapimí, Chihuahuan Desert, Old Mexico

    The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper. – Eden Phillpotts

    The desert wind blew warm and dry across his face layering grit on his chapped lips. He dropped the square bottle to his mouth and let the agave drip down his chin. The cold air bit into his bones. He wrenched the long robe tighter around him.

    “What’s that?” he shouted out as he spun into the wind. He cocked his head to the left listening for a voice. The bottle sloshed at his side.

    “Un visitante?”

    He laughed a high cackle and spun around with his arms outstretched as if to collect all the stars in the sky. The bottle swung up in the air and a stream of Mescal sprayed out into the wind raining down on him. The drops bounced off his nose and forehead. He looked up and watched a drop grow larger and land in his eye. He wiped his face and shook his hair. He shouted at the stars.

    “There are no visitors here. Nobody dares come into this hell-forsaken sand trap.”

    He laughed before listening again. There was nothing but the wind blowing past the field of creosote and ocotillo. The wind rubbed the plants together forming a low hum.

    “No me diga?”

    The man cocked a confused look toward the sky. He took a step and stumbled forward to his knees. The bottle dug into the sand. He listened to the wind.

    “You don’t say.”

    (more…)

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  • Pantser Plotter

    There are two camps of thought: the people who listen to the muse and write by the seat of their pants and the people who write an entire book-length outline prior to starting to write.

    I prefer to combine the two, without writing an entire book-length outline. Let me explain my thoughts on this debate.

    Pantsers argue they are free to listen to the story and the characters. It is a muse-centric approach, with the characters exploring the milieu and wandering about discovering the story. All fine and well. It is interesting how a story can take on a life and allow a writer to document scenes and fill in the story.

    Plotters say there is no way a story can take shape without a road map: it requires a structure to allow the characters to face their inner and external conflicts. The characters are forced to face their fears. Plotters like to know where the story is headed.

    Here is my take: Pantsers need to outline and Plotters need to be open to just writing.

    In my experience, without an outline I have twice been abandoned by my characters in the second act. They exhibit attention deficit disorder and climb out of the book. The characters say “well, that’s all I got,” and the story sort of fizzles out. I’m rewriting “Fish Tacos: Or How I Went To Mexico to Save My Soul” because the main character started bitching about his past and failed to get off his butt. Sure, I’m the writer, it is my story, but I let the character dictate where he would go and when he would get there. Believe me, if left to his designs, the main character would still be sitting in the desert waiting to move.

    So now I plot everything: short stories; novels; non-fiction; and, screenplays. I give the viewpoint characters a purpose and a timeline to meet. I challenge them to face their demons. I gift them happy successes. By the time the story ends, they see their doubts, obstacles, challenges, and growth.

    In some ways this is the perfect way to write by the seat of your pants: the story structure lets them wander about, as long as they meet their deadlines. So I guess I’m a Pantser Plotter . It seems to be working.

    [plain]How do you plan your projects? Do you outline or just let it flow? Leave a comment below.[/plain]
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  • On the Path from Small to Large

    Small.
    Brownie Cottage.
    300 square feet.
    Enough room to sit.
    And maybe spin all around.
    The size of a gingerbread doghouse.
    If the dog was a small mastiff.
    A big dog with a very large appetite.
    With no place to store the dog food bags.
    The minimalists say we all could stand to slim down.
    That our mega mansions, stuff, and stacks of books signify waste.
    But the very thought of living in a one-room cabin frightens me:
    Like Thoreau living in an urban forest with no solitude or private pond.
    The stacks of books, hand selected, some with gold leaf edges are precious friends.
    Even if they spill off the shelves and pile up in towers on the floor.
    “You’re a hoarder,” say visitors who look down in disdain at my collection of wordy excess.
    And although I attempt to purge, sort, and reduce the pages, it is hard to part company.
    They all contain dreams, fantastic journeys, ginormous thoughts, hidden truths, ineffable fruit, obsolete wisdom, scientific hypotheses, and farce.
    Put them on a Kindle, they say, yet most are out-of-print, esoteric, or hand-me-down treasures.
    Which makes it all the more difficult to release them to a better place; a Goodwill, or a book sale.
    So they stand stacked like beleaguered sentries circled in spindly towers keeping silent watch over words cluttering the floor.
    They wait and watch with dread wondering when they will be released into the world and set free.
    Each knows I haven’t the courage to sort, pick, or drop any of them into a box.
    A certain belief none of them will be downsized to shoehorn them into a tiny house.
    Or are they mistaken to express this joyful expectation that they are so highly regarded?
    Unfortunately some must be labeled, screened, and stacked for certain delivery to the curb.
    The house must shrink from 3,500 to 1,700 squares, albeit not a one-room schoolhouse.
    It is still smaller than the library where the sentries now stand guard.
    The childhood adventures remain and the college texts with inspired margin notes.
    Each is carefully stacked next to the poems and dime-store mysteries.
    The free classics will find a home electronic and portable.
    Words stacked neatly alphabetical in my library virtual.
    I will sneak in some Steinbeck or Holmes.
    The rest will be donated for free.
    To give others pleasure or pain.
    The words will worm inward.
    To plant a seed.
    An inspirational spark.
    To think.
    Large.

    Copyright 2015, Michael S. Sommermeyer. All Rights Reserved.

    [plain]This shape poem works from one to 20 words and then back to a single word. Pick a topic and write your own shape poem. Add it to the comments below.[/plain]
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