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  • March 16, 2017 Scribble

    March 16, 2017 Scribble

    A chance to bleed.

    I spent the morning re-writing explanations of my writing tools so they would make more sense. I actually found a few ideas I had forgotten such as planning climaxes and struggles. I think most of these things are apparent, for instance, you tend to see them pop up. But that is the pantser in me; plotters get ahead faster. I used to be just a pantser because it fit better with my observational nature. However, if you fail to notice a detail, it will show in the story. So you have to think about the plot to help build up the scenes. Anyway, plotting is much better than pantsing when you get to the middle of part two and you have no idea what comes next.

    ***

    What’s better: a comb-over or buzz-cut? The buzz-cut aficionados swear running a blade through their hair solves so many problems and looks better. If a bunch of round heads looks better, then fine. The comb-over set swears at least they have a few hairs to shape up their head. Of course, they look ridiculous if only two hairs cover the bald spot. Maybe it is time to think about a toupee?

    ***

    Four women stand like a choir bunched up against the rosemary wall separating the federal courthouse from the sidewalk. They can stand on the path and protest as long as they keep it open for visitors. Together they hold a sign; “Justices for Our Brothers.” On the back of the sign slashes tally up the number of hugs offered to anyone who passes. The count totals more than 600.

    ***

    Chicken and Wild Rice soup simmers in the kitchen. The wild rice resembles black-eyed peas with the brown speck surrounding the white kernel. Orange rounds of carrot float on the surface. The perfect soup for a cold day. But, it’s nearly 90 outside. For some reason this year, I dislike the warm weather. With nearly 400 inches of snow I want another storm  to dump more frozen water. Might as well see if additional records are broken. Towards summer, the melt may lead to a second round of records as the most snow leads to the most runoff. Maybe a new lake will form in the Fallon desert. Lake Tahoe has enough water to keep the Truckee flowing for three years. And more is on the way. Northern Nevada lies under piles of snow and ice. Send some of that south; we need a few more days of winter.

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    In my present condition, the only thing left to eat is dirt. Dirt contains no cholesterol and no sugar. Depending on the source, dirt contains iron and other minerals. Free-range dirt sounds organic, but even it can lead to problems; the raw soil might contain natural asbestos or arsenic. Even dirt has its limitations.

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    Mark Twain spent a sojourn in Territorial Nevada. Some of his observations in the gold and silver camps of the Sierra Nevada ended up as well-remembered short stories. Other pieces found there way into longer novels from his office in Hartford, Connecticut. The school room scene in the Adventures of Tom Sawyer originated at a schoolroom in Carson City. Always be on the lookout for interesting events or scenes. They will prove useful at another time.

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    I still like to ramble adding unneeded words to sentences. My mantra has become, “Get to the Point!”

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    A nine-foot stone wall stands across from the Spanish mission with water flowing over red sandstone rocks. Two fat pigeons, one grey and other steel, each splash through the puddles of water before they fall to the pool. The artificial river meanders passed a canyon of concrete, Mexican fan palms, and under flat tan rocks until the water reaches the pump. With a whisk, the water starts the climb again.

    A potable water truck pumps rainwater from Utah into the pool. This is water trucked 500 miles to make the desert green. A  pet project of a former mayor who demanded a water fountain between the city courthouses. At the end of the river, the Poets Bridge features Earth House Hold poet Gary Snyder and 19 other poets and Las Vegas artists.

     

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  • March 15, 2017 Scribble

    I spent twenty minutes holding my head to the right as a doctor went in again for my fourth thyroid biopsy. “Boy this is really deep,” he said. “Yep, maybe you’ll be the guy,” I said. It is clear with have a nodule or two. We don’t clearly know if it is cancer. “At least if it is cancer, this is the best one to get,” said my endocrinologist. “It takes so long to grow.” Comforting. While other writers are busy taking people to other places, I’m in an endless loop of out-patient surgery. No, you would not be interested in the waiting, prodding, and sore neck. It doesn’t jump off as one of those stories you want to hear.

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    Hemingway said, “There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at a typewriter and bleed.” True. Sometimes you just have to write it out and hope something sticks. Then let it fall to the floor. In Hemingway & Gellhorn  he says,” Never crumple pages. Always let them float gently into the basket. Any writer who rips out his stuff and crumples it will go insane in a year, guaranteed.” I like the idea of floating paper to the trash. I would float this to the trash, but it’s a huge monitor.

    ***

    It turns out nobody reads this blog. (more…)

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  • March 7, 2017 Scribble

    March 7, 2017 Scribble

    You can read this if you wish although it consists of thoughts and fragments as I attempt to free write 750 words every day. Some of this may end up in a Story or a Conversation. Anyway, this is how one learn and shapes up The Craft.

    The Big Squeeze is coming to Las Vegas. The Spaghetti Bowl, a large mess of on ramps and off ramps between the US 95 and I-15 will soon be reduced to two lanes. It already becomes two lanes on US-95 under the Bowl, so I’m not sure how this is a squeeze, but through media hyperbole and advertising, I’m to understand this will be terrible.

    This morning, I decided to find an alternative route. On the advice of some friends, I decided to try North Fifth, a new road into North Las Vegas.

    After fifteen minutes waiting for a light to change and let three cars through at a time, I’ve decided I can suffer through the impending peril of the Big Squeeze. Even if I sit for 5 extra minutes, it will surely beat a 55 minute commute to go 20 miles via surface streets. This is ranting I know, but you have to start 750-words somehow.

    We spring back this weekend. Frankly, this just means getting up earlier. Remember to set your clocks ahead. (Don’t think about it too much: Your head will explode).

    Sequoia Strawberries in the flower bed mulch
    Lined up like bare root roses
    Patted safe in the warm soil
    Watered and blessed; a hopeful refrain.

    Spring lasts a few days before summer rays
    Bear down on the garden beds
    Warming the soil to dry dust
    A delicate balance to keep them moist.

    The morning frost reminds spring follows winter
    Breezes as March enters like a lion
    Or sneaks in like a lamb.
    Either way, the garden struggles to bloom.

    A small leaf springs up from the bare root tip
    As roots firmly establish themselves
    And the plant becomes accustomed to its new home.
    It spreads out to take space.

    Small droplets in the morning light
    On large leaves of green vermillion
    Summer sun gobbles up the water
    As ladybugs jump through the delicate flowers.

    “Are you drinking enough water?”

    “I think so.”

    “It’s getting hotter and you need to be refreshed.”

    “I went to the bathroom three times tonight.”

    “You’re diabetic. That’s a sure sign of the disease.”

    “I don’t suppose four tall glasses of water had anything to do with it.”

    In these writing exercises you are supposed to write whatever comes to your head, in any order, without stopping. This came to my head just now.

    S. I. Hayakawa was a U.S Senator from California, and before that he was a semanticist at San Francisco State University. I first read his book Language and Action in high school. The idea Bessie the Cow was an abstraction allowed me to add only those details that made her a cow, rather than endlessly describe all of her features. Abstraction allows writers to write a picture that others fill in. Hayakawa warned to stay at the top of the abstraction tree, otherwise you could lead others into an existential hell.

    Trees have a colored leaf. And the leaf is made of smaller parts from veins to individual cells. Staying at the top allows the reader to fill in the abstractions, without the writer having to describe the color of the veins or explain the arrangement of the cells. However, sometimes a writer wants to describe these things. Knowing when to stop is the art of writing. A writer must be careful not to chase themselves around in circles!

    Hayakawa also addresses the power of words to hypnotize and manipulate. If a person can be convinced a brown cow is really white through powerful descriptions, then a writer can powerfully draw a crowd in with the force of prose. He cautions readers to avoid taking whatever a person says at face value; question them and their motivations. Abstractive communication allows writers to rely on simile, metaphor, irony and pathos to communicate an idea. Abstraction has power as long as everyone agrees on the definition of the abstraction.

    Too deep? Enough philosophy on the mechanisms of writing.

    “I just don’t feel motivated or respected.”

    “You hate your job?”

    “Just the people. Nobody sees my contribution.”

    “So you’re looking for a reward?”

    “I would like to be respected and given a little credit.”

    “For showing up?”

    “For making this place work despite the lack of respect.”

    “You received a paycheck this week?”

    “Yes.”

    “I think you they must like you.”

    I’m running out of words for this session’s writing activity and likely this will end long before I ever get to the bottom of a deep well. There. We now have 750-words!

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  • March 3, 2017 Scribble

    March 3, 2017 Scribble

    You can read this if you wish although it consists of thoughts and fragments as I attempt to free write 750 words every day. Some of this may end up in a Story or a Conversation. Anyway, this is how one learn and shapes up The Craft.

    America is divided. The Hatfield vs. the McCoys. #BLM vs #BLM. Of course, it is nowhere near the biggest mix up as The Orange and the Green.  At least not yet. (more…)

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  • March 2, 2017 Scribble

    You can read this if you wish although it consists of thoughts and fragments as I attempt to free write 750 words every day. Some of this may end up in a Story or a Conversation. Anyway, this is how one learn and shapes up The Craft.

    According to my new writing goal, I am supposed to just write down whatever comes to my head and finish up in 750 words. The whole thing sounds a bit of a waste of time, frankly. I don’t have the luxury of writing nothing; there is so much more to write and get done.

    Yet, here I am just writing. And counting time.

    (more…)

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  • Driving Back from Spring Break

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    Three days earlier I studied all night with a girlfriend for a physics exam and afterward drove four classmates 12 hours to San Diego for spring break. The entire trip the girls giggled and cackled behind me while a Korean kid sat silent up front. I decided we scared Jae. Although, being a confused immigrant might also explain his silence. Either way, he only said thanks when I dropped him off at his house. For that matter, Cindy told me how to find it.

    The rest of the trip to Oceanside I drove in a blur on autopilot. All of the lights merged into a slow motion light show and I doubt I could even tell you about the trip. I arrived at the motel, went to bed, and slept nearly all Sunday despite my mother’s pleas to come to the beach. In the morning, I drove her north to Anaheim where we rode the teacups, stood in a long line for the bobsleds, and paddled a canoe. We ate dinner on the bayou, visited the pirates, posed with Mickey Mouse, and explored the Swiss Family Robinson tree house. Overall, mom had a great time and I played the sweet son. By nightfall, the sky exploded with fireworks and we headed back south. Mom slept pressed into the window missing the nuclear power plant, the Marines, and the moonlit beach. As the tail lights on the interstate blurred into red, I again drove like a drone.

    Tuesday, I left mom in the room sadly wondering why I was heading back to college. I made Spring Break last only as long as a three-day weekend with an irritating baby. At the studio I planned to make a lot of cash in the remaining days of my break.

    Before I left, Cindy called to say she wanted to ride back with me to school.

    (more…)

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  • The Baby Picture

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    “The usual?” Mary grabbed two slices of sourdough from a bag before slapping on some tuna salad.

    “Yeah,” Tom replied looking around the deli.

    Two small puddles of rain water merged on the floor. He shook the drops from his umbrella before sticking it into a cloth grocery sack. Water leaked through the canvas of the heavy bag. He looked around to see if anyone saw its contents.

    Mary sliced through his sandwich, placed it on a plate with pickle, and pushed it toward him. He placed on his tray a banana from the fruit basket and a cello-wrapped brownie from the deserts.

    “Just a cup of ice water,” he said paying for the lunch.

    (more…)

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  • A Visitor Awaits

    A Visitor Awaits

    Bolsón de Mapimí, Chihuahuan Desert, Old Mexico

    The universe is full of magical things patiently waiting for our wits to grow sharper. – Eden Phillpotts

    The desert wind blew warm and dry across his face layering grit on his chapped lips. He dropped the square bottle to his mouth and let the agave drip down his chin. The cold air bit into his bones. He wrenched the long robe tighter around him.

    “What’s that?” he shouted out as he spun into the wind. He cocked his head to the left listening for a voice. The bottle sloshed at his side.

    “Un visitante?”

    He laughed a high cackle and spun around with his arms outstretched as if to collect all the stars in the sky. The bottle swung up in the air and a stream of Mescal sprayed out into the wind raining down on him. The drops bounced off his nose and forehead. He looked up and watched a drop grow larger and land in his eye. He wiped his face and shook his hair. He shouted at the stars.

    “There are no visitors here. Nobody dares come into this hell-forsaken sand trap.”

    He laughed before listening again. There was nothing but the wind blowing past the field of creosote and ocotillo. The wind rubbed the plants together forming a low hum.

    “No me diga?”

    The man cocked a confused look toward the sky. He took a step and stumbled forward to his knees. The bottle dug into the sand. He listened to the wind.

    “You don’t say.”

    (more…)

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  • Moments Before the Ambulance Arrives

    Moments Before the Ambulance Arrives

    A Conversation

    “We found him out here just laying on the sidewalk?

    “Nude?”

    “Yep. He looked dead.”

    “And then he jumped up?”

    “Yeah. Jumped off and started yelling.”

    “All that stuff about ‘do you know who I am?’ and “you should listen’?

    “I think he must have been a big shot once. I don’t think he is anymore.”

    “He ran for awhile and then collapsed?”

    “Strangest thing; seemed to run out of energy. He ran around, bumped into a few people, and then fell down. I swore he died again. Oh my, he’s sprinting away.”

    “You guys need to hold him down. There, I think they have it.”

    “That guy knows how to run.”

    “Too much adrenaline. We can counteract it with this dose. Right in the neck. That’s it.”

    “Will he be much trouble?”

    “No. We’ll take him away and keep him safe.”

    “What if he sprints again?”

    “Not wearing this special jacket, ankle cuffs, and diaper.”

    “He looks almost normal.”

    “Yes. Almost normal.”

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  • Can You Hear Me Now, Hollywood?

    Can You Hear Me Now, Hollywood?

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    A loud sneeze sent a nose full of snot onto the steering wheel and the windshield. James pushed the phone away from the explosion and the rain of mucus.

    “Are you gonna be all right?” Sally snickered through the phone.

    “Damn ragweed.” James looked around for a tissue. He also tried not to run his hand through the sticky mess on his steering wheel. “I’m blowing my nose or snorting up salt water.”

    He dug through the console for a napkin or any kind of paper. He found nothing to wipe his mess.

    James clicked on the speaker button and dropped the phone on the passenger’s seat. He moved his left hand through the snot on the wheel. James shook his hand onto the floor and yelled into the phone.

    “I don’t have time for this crap.” The snot now covered his pant leg. “Email Mike the job, call my doctor, and find me a box of tissues.”

    James turned his convertible onto Mulholland Highway and headed north. The other end of the line was silent.

    “I’m in a hole,” he said. “I’ll pop out in a moment.”

    The cell towers often dropped calls and Sally waited. She figured he would always call back.

    The sun was shining through the dried yellow mucus on the windshield to create a rainbow on his dash. He looked at the light and ignored the bungalows and exclusive homes of Beachwood Canyon.

    James turned a few more times up the winding road. He reached for the phone and caught static. After a few more turns, a voice came through.

    “He says he won’t do it this time.” Her voice sounded distant.

    “What does that mean?” he shouted. “Of course, he will. There’s no one else.”

    “I think it will cost more this time.”

    “It shouldn’t cost more than last time.” He looked at the screen. “The job hasn’t changed.” He slapped the phone on the wheel and turned the car to the right. He corrected before he clipped two bikers on their way to the Hollywood sign.

    “Email him again and make it clear,” James yelled.

    He pulled into a far parking spot at Lake Hollywood Park and stopped the car.

    James fell out of the car along with a stack of bent coffee cups. A wadded up napkin followed the empties and blew off toward the grass. He stumbled up grabbing the wad and ripped it apart. With the paper remains, he dabbed at the steering wheel.

    “You still there?”

    He made out a silent sigh.

    “Good, we can iron this out.”

    He explained how Mike had no excuse to refuse.

    “It’s easy.” James talked with his arms. He waved his left hand in the air.

    “He parks on the fifth floor under the camera.”

    “Uh, huh.”

    “No one will notice him get out.”

    “Uh, huh.”

    “He takes the box with him and inches along the wall.”

    “Why doesn’t the camera see him?” she said.

    “It’s pointed out at the cars and not the wall.”

    “Oh,” she said. He could tell she did not understand.

    “The camera points across the garage,” he explained. “It doesn’t pick up on things too close.”

    “I get it.”

    He lost track of the next step. James thought he should do it himself.

    “No one will see him coming,” he said, while pushing his finger toward the ground.

    “I’m not sure everything will fit in the box,” she said.

    “They came in the box.” James clinched his eyes and rubbed his forehead. “Why is there a problem?”

    “The canisters are too big and he can’t put his mask in the box with everything too,” she said.

    “Have him wear the mask and carry the box.”

    A small boy and man passed him in the parking log carrying a kite. James looked up at the sky. A few clouds floated up from the ocean. It was a nice day for playing in the wind.

    “Canisters?” James asked. “They’re cupcakes, for crying out loud,” he shouted. “Just have him carry the cupcakes, wear his superhero mask, and surprise her.”

    “Cupcakes?” she asked.

    “Yes, a dozen red velvet with the yellow baby bottle sugar decorations.” Sometimes she exasperated him.

    “Do you think you can pass this on Mike?”

    James detected dead silence on the other end of the phone and he wondered if Sally understood him. He raised his head and stared at the clouds. He shook his head dumbfounded. James wondered why everything with her required so much energy.

    “Sally?” he asked. She had to know her own name. Sometimes she drove him nuts. He looked around the park for a closer cell tower.

    “Sally? James enunciated to make sure she understood him. The pause lasted a long time.

    The voice on the other end of the line cleared her throat.

    “This isn’t Sally.”

    He pulled his phone away and brought it back to his ear. What did she mean, this isn’t Sally? James listened to a man in the background tell the woman to shut up and the phone went dead.

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